Lizzy - Woods

On the (-) side, your field of focus (plane of focus?) has Lizzie's form fighting for prominence against the twigs and branches she is posed against. Somehow, that direct equality needs to be changed to a contrast. It should be subtle, not hard.

You could bring her forward a bit by highlighting her in a bit of a "light fuzz". I don't know the photog terms, but I mean she could glow just a bit, just a tiny bit, to set her off.

The sense of space around her, such as at her back and around her shoulders, head and just above could be accentuated. Not exactly sure how accentuated, but not straight B&W anwyay. Shee needs a sense of space surrounding her to differnentiate her from the background.

Lizzie, as always, is lovely, such a lovely person. Please convey my marvelling wonder that she consented to this pic of her... Lizzie is as always simply beautiful.

Russ